October 14, 2011

My Fabulous Moments

Me
He is a cat whom I play with
@ Islamic Center Mosque


      
  

       
       




        


         I have a great deal of awesome experiences when I traveled to Kalimantan. On July 25th, 2011, I went to Kalimantan to visit my mother. It was the second chance for me to get on airplane; nonetheless, it was the first time for me to go by plane alone. After my mother picked me up from Sepinggan Airport, we went to the Islamic Center Mosque hurriedly. I also took an astounding  picture there. On arriving home in Kalimantan, I played with a cat. The cat is very alive. He ran to go up and down. I tried to chased him, so I was really weary then. Another activities that I did is practicing to drive a car. Because the roads were not busy, I could drive comfortably. The final interest, I bought mementoes. Buying mementoes was not enough for one day; hence, I completed to buy them on the following day. From that fabulous moments, this has been the best experience within my recollection.



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October 08, 2011

Sania's Special Room

Sania in her special room
     In a beautiful world, I have a beautiful friend. Her name is Sania. I will tell you about her special room that she loves the most, her bed room. Sania has own bedroom when she graduated from elementary school. In Sania's room, there is a television. She usually watches TV in her leisure time. There is also a cupboard at the corner. At the center of room, there is a long comfortable bed; besides, that is a comfortable place for her to relax. After Sania was 12, she has to share her room with her sister, Destri; however, they are happy to do everything together. They are open in everything. One for all, and all for one. Thus, that is a special room for Sania; a special bed room for her special moments.

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