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| Sania in her special room |
In a beautiful world, I have a beautiful friend. Her name is Sania. I will tell you about her special room that she loves the most, her bed room. Sania has own bedroom when she graduated from elementary school. In Sania's room, there is a television. She usually watches TV in her leisure time. There is also a cupboard at the corner. At the center of room, there is a long comfortable bed; besides, that is a comfortable place for her to relax. After Sania was 12, she has to share her room with her sister, Destri; however, they are happy to do everything together. They are open in everything. One for all, and all for one. Thus, that is a special room for Sania; a special bed room for her special moments.
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excuse me,the blue color is too sharp when i read the word.:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ami, I will make a calm color in the next post.
ReplyDeleteiiih... buni unyu-unyu deeeh ... :P
ReplyDeletemay i come around some day..??
wanna try buni's long comfortable bed..
hehehe...
ohyaa.. nice writing nabiiil.... (>_^)
ReplyDeleteThanks a million, Hika..
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Ika.
ReplyDeletePlease, come to my house.
Thanks a million to made a story about me.
Really wonderful paragraph! It's nice to read this as it gives the readers a detail, systematic, and clear description about the developed topic sentence. U do realize if it's final writing so, ur writing is free from mistake in grammar so far (I do appreciate it). Simple but well organized. Excellent!
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ReplyDeleteThank you so much, mis.....
I done this task finely because of you....
Truthfully, I must learn again.
Tell me if I do a boob, please..
I really want it for my improvement...
I hope I can be better for the next :)