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I have a great deal of awesome experiences when I traveled to Kalimantan. On July 25th, 2011, I went to Kalimantan to visit my mother. It was the second chance for me to get on airplane; nonetheless, it was the first time for me to go by plane alone. After my mother picked me up from Sepinggan Airport, we went to the Islamic Center Mosque hurriedly. I also took an astounding picture there. On arriving home in Kalimantan, I played with a cat. The cat is very alive. He ran to go up and down. I tried to chased him, so I was really weary then. Another activities that I did is practicing to drive a car. Because the roads were not busy, I could drive comfortably. The final interest, I bought mementoes. Buying mementoes was not enough for one day; hence, I completed to buy them on the following day. From that fabulous moments, this has been the best experience within my recollection.
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CUTE CAT!!!!!
ReplyDeletehohoooo..
ReplyDeleteYou are captivated by him.
I think your cat also has an engaging style when he sleep...
It's nice experience... thank you so much for your comment in my blog, Actually, I have changed my word... you can see anymore..
ReplyDeleteIt's really wonderful u have tried to develop ur vocabulary. I do like and appreciate it. U successfully develop ur TS by ur detail supporting sentence. U also used several transition signals properly. Hmm, Nabil, I think ur writing will be much better if u pay a heed to the 'lil things as well. Using varied words are amazing, yet u have to also have to be selective to use 'em. Mind ur grammar too. Too often not paying attention to the 'lil things breaks the product. All in all, nice to know the progres of ur writing:-)
ReplyDeletePS: Keep giving comments 2 others too, ok!